Sure, the idea sounded great in the war room, but did it survive the transition to the page? Does the narrative arc flow and resolve? Is there even a narrative arc at all? Is that joke funny to anyone besides the CD? Is the dialogue authentic? Where’s the pathos? I have no idea. At least not until you send me the script. Then I’ll have plenty of ideas. And answers. And I’ll use them to fix your spot.
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